Yousef Shashtari Clouds First March 4th

Yousef Shashtari Clouds First March 4th

This image was taken on March 4th, 2018 in Boulder, CO. I think the clouds represent cumulus type, since they were puffy and they had the cotton-like shape.

Clouds first report:
https://www.flowvis.org/wp-content/uploads/2018/03/Yousef-Shashtari.pdf

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  • Michael Guenther
    Apr 16, 2018 17:15

    The photo looks like a painting, the foreground is interesting as well.

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  • Yousef Shashtari
    Mar 14, 2018 11:50

    take the contrast down, crop the trees on the bottom

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  • Riley Kenyon
    Mar 14, 2018 11:49

    The foreground in this image is a little distracting, but the mountains add some good texture to the image. The dark sky is really captivating.

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  • Philip Nystrom
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    Nice composition, but I would change the colors in the image. Overall nice image though.

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  • Lucas Sorensen
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    Good image, I like the sun shining through the clouds. I would consider increasing the contrast to darken the foreground.

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  • Geya Kairamkonda
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    I like the ominous feel of the clouds. Maybe just focus on the part where the sun isn’t there? Also, maybe the get rid of the brown foreground or make it darker?

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  • Julian Quick
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    Nice job. I like the contrast in the picture. It does look foreboding, almost like a storm is approaching.

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  • Zachary Marshall
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    The sun shinning right through is really nice. I enjoy the trees adding a boarder around the mountains and bottom of the image.

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  • Daniel Petrykowski
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    Do you think the shutter speed could be increased to improve the time resolution?

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  • Cyron Completo
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    This image is gloomy and sad due to the grays and the relative darkness of the scene. I like how you chose to include the Sun poking through the clouds in order to add an element of “hope” to the scene. I can see the textures of the clouds due to the variation of grays.

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  • Lea Mattson
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    It looks like a storm brewing. Although the cloud peeking through shows that the cloud is not that thick.

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  • Jacob Lanier
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    The different shades of clouds is good. The image seems a bit grainy, and the contrast could be bumped down at bit.

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  • Casey Cooter
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    Really digging the darkness of this image, although I might have my screen contrast low since it looks a lot more enhanced on the projector. You might stretch the contrast a bit to make the other colors pop a bit more, depending on the image you want to portray.

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  • Gabriel Elbert
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    Image is nice, the colors are great

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  • John Monahan
    Mar 14, 2018 11:48

    I think you might be able to get some of the distracting foreground out of the image.

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  • Gabriel McGann
    Mar 14, 2018 11:47

    The sun streaming through the clouds is a really cool effect. I like the color balance a lot. There is a bit of blotchiness towards the left of the foreground though.

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  • Abigail Rastatter
    Mar 14, 2018 11:47

    Love the mood this image has. Nice coloring on that pine tree in the right corner – super vibrant green.

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  • Jordan Nahabetian
    Mar 14, 2018 11:47

    I like the heavy presence of the clouds

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  • Madison Emmett
    Mar 14, 2018 11:47

    I like the stormy feeling of this image. The clouds and colors seem ominous. I like the foreground as well.

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  • Lara Buri
    Mar 14, 2018 11:47

    I like the darker cloud formation in this photo. Did you bring the highlights way down? The sun looks almost artificial, maybe consider bringing highlights up just to give less of an emphasis on the sun.

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  • Cody Williams
    Mar 14, 2018 11:47

    I like that you captured the sun beaming through the massive blanket of billowy clouds. Good focus

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  • Wesley Caruso
    Mar 14, 2018 11:47

    Really cool photo. I like the blue glare that breaks off from the sun’s rays.

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